Tuesday, October 27, 2009
Journal #6
Monday, October 19, 2009
journal #5
It is about what the student should do to make this homecoming a great one although it is not a celebration for student. The writer persuades the student to join and enjoy the celebration and be nice to the alumni. The writer did that by writing that the student will someday become alumni and return to Ames and make the reader think that do we want our homecoming to be a bad memory because of the current student. The writer method was a success because he/she relates the story to the readers. It made the readers think and acted accordingly to avoid what the writer just wrote in the article to happen to them
Grooving on 'Guitar Hero' by Tom Hummer, Oct 16
The article is about the writer disagreement from a statement that playing video game called 'Guitar Hero' which is a guitar simulation game that played using a guitar shape controller, a detract people from playing the real instrument. The writer backs his opinion with a strong argument, he wrote that if someone play 'Gran Turismo' a race car simulation why the person don’t just race real car instead. He also wrote that the playing 'guitar hero' or other similar games were similar like playing the actual instrument and lot of people started to play the actual instrument after playing the game. The writer did a good job because he back up his opinion with a good example and statistic to prove his point.